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October 2026 writing competition

The Lantern Night

Autumn magic and wonder

On a cold, misty October evening, you find an old paper lantern glowing softly on your doorstep, even though nobody has lit it. When you pick it up, its light begins to move and seems to want you to follow. Write the story of where the lantern leads you and what you discover.

Congratulations to every child who entered — choosing was hard! Here are the stories our judges picked in each year group.

The prizes (in each year group)

  • Winner: 1 year of Premium and a winner's certificate
  • Runner-up: 3 months of Premium and a certificate
  • Highly commended: a certificate

Year 4

Winner

Ankita, Year 4

The mist had crept in like a grey cat, curling around the lampposts and swallowing the end of our street. That was when I saw it: an old paper lantern glowing softly on our doorstep. There was no candle inside, no battery, nothing at all. When I picked it up, the golden light slid sideways, as if it were beckoning me. Follow me. My heart thudded against my ribs, but my feet began to walk before my brain could argue. The glow parted the fog, opening a little tunnel just for me. Past silent houses, through the creaking park gates we went, until we reached the oldest oak tree, its bare branches scratching at the sky like bony fingers. Then I heard it. A tiny, trembling sound. Mew. Inside the hollow, shivering so hard its whiskers quivered, was a tabby kitten. Its eyes shone like two green marbles. Gently, I wrapped it in my warm scarf, and it began, very faintly, to purr. Its collar read: Biscuit. 14 Willow Lane. When I knocked, an old lady opened the door, her eyes red from crying. “My Biscuit!” she gasped, hugging us both tightly. Her cardigan smelled of lavender and toast. Walking home, I looked down at the lantern. Its light flickered once, like a wink, and then quietly went out. But somehow, I still felt warm inside.

226 words

Year 5

Winner

Ansh B., Year 5

Every year on the last night of autumn, the hole village of Ashbrook gathered by the river to light there lanterns. Mia had been waiting for this night for weeks, but this year was different. This year her grandad wasnt there. "Will he see the lanterns from were he is?" mia asked her mum quietly. Her mum squeezed her hand. "I think he will, love." The sky was a deep purple colour and the air smelt of woodsmoke and toffee apples. Children ran between the stalls, there laughter bouncing off the old stone bridge. Mia holded her lantern tightly it was the one grandad had helped her make, with paper stars glued onto the sides and a little wonky handle. When the church bell rang, everyone walks down to the waters edge. One by one, the lanterns was lit. Golden lights flickered and danced like fireflys trapped in jars. Mia's hands was shaking as she struck the match. The flame wobbled, then caught, and her lantern glowed a warm orange. She placed it gently on the water. At first it didnt move. Then, slowly, the current carried it away, past the reeds, past the bridge, untill it joined the river of lights drifting towards the dark hills. Suddenly, a gust of wind blew across the river. Mias lantern tipped. Her heart jumped into her throat. But it didn't sink. It straightend itself, and carried on, brighter than before. Mia smiled for the first time all evening. She felt as though someone, somewhere, had gave it a little push. "Goodnight, grandad," she whispered, and the lantern disapeared around the bend.

269 words

Highly commended

Zeenat, Year 5

The poignant autumn chill pressed relentlessly against the glass windowpane, ushering in a dense, sepulchral mist that progressively swallowed the distant, flickering streetlights. It was an ethereal, enigmatic October evening, a twilight world where the corporeal realm dissolved completely into an intricate tapestry of hushed, ancient secrets. Suddenly, a luminous, amber warmth effervesced mysteriously just beyond my threshold. Drawn by an inexplicable, magnetic pull, I ventured cautiously onto the dark porch. Resting upon the damp, weathered timber sat an antique, ornate paper lantern. Its intricate iron skeletal frame bore the distinct patina of centuries, and the fragile parchment, though heavily yellowed and brittle, housed a brilliant, liquid-gold luminescence. Remarkably, no terrestrial match had sparked this vibrant glow. As my trembling fingers clasped the cold wire bail, the structural anomaly deepened: the flame did not flicker against the aggressive draft but instead elongated, morphing into a sentient, dazzling ribbon of pure radiance that unfurled toward the labyrinthine woods. It tugged imperceptibly against my hand, serving as an unspoken, mystical summons. Surrendering to a profound, intoxicating curiosity, I plunged directly into the encroaching, suffocating fog. The artifact guided me past the familiar, comforting periphery of my yard and deep into a primordial tract of the dense forest. As we progressed, the mundane nocturnal symphony ceased entirely; the howling autumn wind died, and the rhythmic crunch of decaying detritus beneath my heavy boots grew uncannily muted. The lantern’s piercing beam clove the obsidian fog, revealing a forgotten staircase of ancient, moss-shrouded monoliths ascending precipitously into a hidden, yawning ravine. At the summit, the dense canopy relented, unveiling a breathtaking, hidden valley entirely insulated from modern temporal reality. Suspended effortlessly above a subterranean, obsidian lake floated an endless constellation of identical paper lanterns, casting iridescent reflections across a bustling, subterranean market square. Phantasmal, silver-furred entities bartered precious vials of distilled starlight, while sylph-like figures draped in woven bark shared spiced, aromatic elixirs that evoked forgotten centuries. This was an ethereal sanctuary for the beautiful, the lost, and the ephemeral. My lantern gave a final, triumphant pulse, its brilliant embers ascending gracefully to coalesce with the celestial canopy above. From the vibrant, kaleidoscopic throng, an enigmatic figure cloaked entirely in deciduous autumn foliage emerged, slowly proffering a completely unlit vessel. "We have long anticipated a new, dedicated custodian," they murmured softly. "Are you truly prepared to illuminate the dark, perilous way for these lost souls?"

400 words

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